Me watching the evening sun................... the dazzling light turning up to dim orange and now the sky was becoming grey n slowly more darker...........
Suddenly i felt myself like the evening ........light of my life.... becoming dimmer day by day....
Shadows of my life are growing more darker n darker....... the darkness is surrounding me more closer...n oneday it will grasp me......
I feel myself like the evening sky........empty..... when the sun is set n moon is yet to come....
My memories are like shining Stars..... but scattered n very far to reach.....
The slowly growing moonlit...... increasing my loneliness n emotions of my heart are becoming cold with the night....
The MOON and Me both alone... silent & still ...................................... and................ waitng for END..............
6 comments:
hmmm...looks gud!! u hav described the evening pretty nicely.. :)
Chintz
hi di.....hope you are fine................this poem was fabulous.....very touching......aisa lagta hain jaise aapne meri muh ki baat cheen li...mein hardam sochti rehti hoon ki aap itna acha kaise likh kete ho...apka har poem dil ko chu leta hain.cia,tk care..........NIDHI
hey,buddy!catalyst of sorts...well i feel u look too good in english..surely a wonderful piece of our eve....!!!
Hi Manya,
Congrats for a very nice poem
The poem is nice and touching, feelings are great but carries rather pessimistic approach towards life. Sun may have gone, but will come again, next morning. Don't loose heart in the empty evening sky.
I would like to quote Martin Luther King, Jr.
We must accept finite disappointment, but we must never lose infinite hope.
Thnx Chintan.. for appareciatng..
Hi Nidhi.. thnks a lot for such gr8 words.. n keep reading.. miss ur sweet words.. tk care.. cya tatas.. :)
Hi ADI.. wat to say u have said a lot in short.. thnx for such nice comment..
Hi Jitu JI.. Thanx for analysing.. n ur gr8 quote...
there no end of life n feelings it bloooms after ur death...
this is ur one of the best work n yaa u r too good in eng...Thnx
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